Write an Impressive Cover Letter

Someone has been giving my prospective candidates lousy advice.  For years, I have received resumes with absurd cover letters.  Many are bizarre.  The worst begins with “In this challenging economic environment.”  Are you kidding me?  If they were trying to impress me, they failed.  They nullified their most crucial sentence with something trite and boring.   I do not know who advocates for this style, but they have done significant damage.

Here is a typical example.

Dear Mr. Weber:  

As a marketer and executive leader, I’m known for creating awareness that drives action and achieving transformational growth for startup, emerging, and mature brands. Most recently, I launched and built a challenger activist brand into a nationwide community movement that drove historic electoral wins. My experience, however, largely spans for-profit industries-art, luxury, and tech where I developed deep expertise in digital communications and brand-driven marketing strategy.

The first time I saw this letter, I did not read past the first sentence.  I doubt that any recipient did.  Why should we?  The writer took forever to get to the point, a big waste of time.   Possibly a good second paragraph, this is the wrong way to begin a cover letter.

This letter went on for seven more paragraphs, totaling 432 words.  It was not until the last paragraph that the author stated what she wanted.   Even then, the description of her ideal role was unclear.  Her most specific point was that she wanted to work for “brands that support social causes or are committed to investing in and evolving a social impact function.”  Since most corporate strategies include a ‘social cause,’ this point was unnecessary.   More wasted time

While researching this topic, I did not find anyone advocating for this style of a cover letter.   The advice on this subject is consistent with my thinking.  So, what is the origin of this style?  I wish I knew!  It makes me wonder if I should send this post to every candidate who violates the rules for writing an effective cover letter.

What is a Cover Letter?  Why is it necessary?  These are useful questions.  A cover letter is an introduction.  It tells the reader who you are, why you are contacting them, and enclosed additional information, like a bio or a resume.   It is handy when sending information unsolicited.  Whenever you send your credentials to a prospective employer or client, use a cover letter.  Today that is usually via email.

The purpose of a cover letter is to entice the reader to give your enclosure a thorough review.  You should provide enough information to captivate their interest, but not so much that they decide against your interests.  From a marketing perspective, a cover letter is a ‘teaser.’  Your letter must spark the reader’s curiosity, compelling them to review your credentials.  The letter or email should answer three questions.

    1. Who are you?
    2. Why are you contacting me? What do you want?
    3. Why should I give you serious consideration?

You must address the first two points in your first sentence.  The remainder of your cover letter provides a summary of your qualifications.  Three bullet points are sufficient.  Let the attachments explain your skills, experience, and interests. Finally, thank the reader for their time and ask for an interview.  Make it effortless for the reader to absorb your message.

Three Types of Cover Letters

    1. Responding to a specific situation (job posting) including a resume
    2. A cold introduction seeking a specific situation (may or may not be a job opening)
    3. A networking introduction (a bio or a detailed intro letter)

A Caveat.  An introductory letter without attachments can be powerful.  In this event, the writer makes a compelling case for her candidacy on one full page.  When closing, the writer offers an invitation to request more information if interested.  This tactic is appropriate for cold introductions, but the letter must be flawless.  It is most effective when sent via USPS.  It is not suitable for most situations.

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Jim Weber, Managing Partner – ITB Partners

Jim Weber – Managing Partner,  ITB Partners

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Your Bio – Why it’s Important!

I cannot begin to tell you how many of my apps want me to update my profile, especially the “about me” blocks.  This includes everything from LinkedIn and other social media accounts to email marketing services and meeting schedulers.  I am sure that you have had the same experience.  They believe a bio is important to attract followers and build one’s reputation.  And they are right!  Fortunately, as I am a big believer in the value of a good bio, these requests are simple ‘cut and paste’ activities.

I recommend that you have a complete and current bio.  It is a useful networking tool. As you know, networking is the key to building your career.  Whether you are in job search, trying to gain more customers, or building your brand, networking is how it’s done.  I recommend having a bio because it is more likely to be read than a resume.  Whereas resumes are scanned, at best, bios are read because they tell a story, especially if your story is interesting.  Throughout history and across cultures, storytelling has been a treasured, universal concept.  People like stories. We all like to read stories. A bio is perfectly suited to tell your story. It’s hard to argue with the concept. That is why I am an enthusiastic supporter.  I often speak to the importance of telling your story, whether networking or in job search.

You still need a resume; however, a bio is more likely to generate interest with a prospective employer. A bio is less threatening from a networking perspective.  Whereas handing someone your resume screams “I am looking for a job,” a bio is more subtle.  It says, “Hey, I want you to know about me in the event you learn of an opportunity that is appropriate for me.”  A bio is a better vehicle to help you build a relationship with the reader.

How to write an interesting bio:

    1. Begin with your overview – your positioning statement
    2. Write in the third person
    3. Make it personal – more than just about your career
    4. Talk about your accomplishments, training, and key learnings
    5. Keep it interesting – use active voice, mix up sentence structure, use short paragraphs
    6. Write it like a short story – what is the theme of your career?
    7. Two pages or less
    8. Include a photo.

Early in my career, I learned that the secret to an effective presentation is to tell them what you are going to tell them, tell them, and then tell them what you told them.  In other words, begin with an overview of the message, provide the message in detail, and then summarize the message.  So, begin your bio with an overview of your career.  My preference is a three-sentence personal positioning statement.  (Review last week’s blog post). The first is about what you do, who you do it for, and how do you do it.  Secondly, speak to the towering strength you bring to the table.  Finally, speak to your value system, leadership style, and the way you conduct your work.  This provides the reader with an inventory of attributes that formed the foundation for your career.

The body of a bio chronicles your work history starting at the beginning of your career then moving forward.  Some people have bios that begin before their formal career as their experiences while maturing created a foundation for their career.  This is always useful information if it is relevant.

The body of a bio provides an opportunity to talk about significant accomplishments, skills learned, and reasons for job changes.  It can also explain breaks in employment for personal or developmental reasons.  Be sure that every paragraph supports the first paragraph, your positioning statement.  The body of your bio provides depth and explains how you acquired your skills and experience.

The final paragraph can be entirely personal.  Lead with your education and awards, certifications, publications, etc.  Talk a little about your family, where you live, and any hobbies or interests that may be compelling.  If you are involved in community service or charitable work, include those interests as well.  Remember, use a conversational tone with an active voice. Alternate between short and compound sentences. Use short paragraphs.  Minimize the use of buzzwords and business jargon.  Above all, make it an interesting read.

The point of any career document is to be invited for an interview.   You want the reader to become interested enough to learn more about you.  A bio is an excellent tool to begin a discussion.  Create several versions, each emphasizing a different primary skill stack.

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Jim Weber – Managing Partner,  ITB Partners

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Position Yourself for Success!

In the past five days, I have had two conversations with job seekers.   Both are Gen Xers, currently under-employed. One is working for a not-for-profit, the other for a conservatively managed packaging company.  They have some job satisfaction, but their scope, salaries, and sense of accomplishment are below their expectations. Both seek positions that are more appropriate to their capabilities, experience, and aspirations.  They want to be fully engaged and productive.  Denise is frustrated as she has had several viable opportunities slip through her fingers. She doesn’t understand why but realizes that she may need professional help.   John is just getting started on his job search.  His career is still on the upswing, so he is looking for greater responsibility.  I agreed to look at their resumes and to offer my thoughts.

Many Baby Boomers and Gen Xers have difficulty reconnecting in this job market.  It is not just because we are recovering from a pandemic induced recession, which has created issues for many service sector companies.  These companies are coming back, albeit slowly.  They are reluctant to add full-time equivalents until they have confidence in their financial situation. Of course, many companies did not survive the lock-down.  Those jobs are gone.  It is a confusing time for healthy companies too.  They are adjusting their strategies, looking for better ways to be competitive and grow revenue. As the economy recovers, their strategy is to identify and pursue new opportunities.  This is exactly the mindset required for job seekers.

Because some job seekers lack a clear sense of direction, they come to me for help.  From my perspective, they do not appreciate the opportunities being created in this economy.  They have difficulty prioritizing the value of their skills.  They don’t understand their Unique Selling Proposition.  They have difficulty creating positioning strategies of interest to employers. They do not have an effective elevator pitch.   And, they have difficulty connecting with younger professionals.  Savvy professionals, they are struggling through “the fog of war.”

The other side of the equation reflects the needs of prospective employers.  Most employment opportunities are with Small to Mid-Cap and emerging Companies.  Many of these are owned by Private Equity Groups.  They need employees who can help them grow.  They need leaders, project managers, program managers, and portfolio managers.  They need employees who can innovate and help them identify new lines of business.

Job Seekers need to think strategically to conduct a successful search.  They need to begin with the fundamentals, analysis.  A viable strategy begins with a SWOT Analysis.  SWOT is the acronym for strengths, weaknesses, opportunities, and threats underlying the planning process.  If you understand this process, you can determine where your strengths align with opportunities in the market. You will understand how to nullify your weaknesses and mitigate threats.  How you deploy your efforts and resources to capitalize on opportunities is your strategy.    Putting these components together to realize your goal is your plan.  If you don’t have the skills to do a strategic analysis of your situation, seek professional help.

When your strategy is established you must craft a clear, concise way to communicate your objective, your positioning statement.  A positioning statement answers three questions.  Who are you?  What do you do?  And how do you conduct your work?  More recently a fourth question has been added; why?  This last question gets to the heart of your value system.

Your Positioning Statement is also known as your Elevator Pitch.  You will use this in person, while networking, and in your written correspondence.  It should be the lead on your LinkedIn Profile, resume, and bio.  It is your Brand Message.  Your Unique Selling Proposition is the “how,” of what you do.  This statement must be easily understood, unique, and memorable.

Baby boomers and Gen Xers have a vast amount of experience managing teams, projects, and programs.  This is a huge advantage that many fail to recognize.  They know how to get things done because they have solid interpersonal skills.  Their leadership abilities set them apart from younger employees.  They need to take stock of their strengths, skills, and experience to understand how and where they are needed by the market.

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Jim Weber – Managing Partner,  ITB Partners

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Great Careers – The BENG Atlanta Chapter December ZOOM Meeting

Jim Weber will present:

Improve Your Writing Skills; Shorten Your Job Search!

Jim Weber – Managing Partner, ITB Partners

Jim Weber will show you how to avoid writing mistakes that sabotage your job search.  Learn how to craft a resume that makes an impact, write a cover letter that positions you as a savvy professional, and create an interesting bio people will read.  Additionally, Jim will discuss how blogging shortens your search time.

Prior to forming New Century Dynamics Executive Search in 1999, Jim Weber spent 22 years with Fortune 500 companies in the Food Retailing Industry where he developed a broad-based portfolio of “hands-on” line and staff experience in growth and turnaround situations. A proven executive with exceptional leadership skills, Jim has a strong financial background and heavy operations experience in specialty retail stores, quick-service restaurants, manufacturing, and distribution.

 

ABOUT GREAT CAREERS – BENG:

The Atlanta chapter of Great Careers – The Business Executives Networking Group (BENG) is a multidiscipline, independent group of job seekers, those currently employed and business networkers, who are willing to help others. Current membership includes mid to senior-level executives with over ten (10) years of business experience. Past attendees have come from financial management, information technology, legal, manufacturing, engineering, transportation, logistics, distribution, and general management industries. We actively seek new members from all disciplines.

Email Jim.Weber@itbpartners.com to reserve your place!

Is Your Job Search Strategy Working?

Without a doubt, 2020 will be unforgettable.  To say, “it was the year that everything changed,” maybe an overstatement, but not by much.  However, it is safe to say the pace of change accelerated in 2020.  You know exactly what I am talking about.  There is no need to recap experiences that are still fresh in your mind.

One unfortunate effect of the Covid-19 Pandemic mitigation efforts has been an increase in unemployment, especially for Senior Executives.  My clients and the people I work with.  Even as the economy recovers, many industry segments struggle to find and maintain a defensible niche.  This has led to terminations as employers adjust to remain profitable.

ITB Partners has not been spared by the events of 2020.  The lock-down resulted in a loss of business for many of our consultants.   Demand for Executive Search has plummeted, although my coaching business is up.  One consulting client has kept me particularly busy.  More recently, the demand for our services has increased, often in unexpected ways.  Our consultants recognize the need, to maintain contact with their clients and prospects, to stay connected.  Overall, the membership at ITB Partners has remained stable.  People still need our services.

My work is focused on helping senior executives, mostly Baby-boomers.  They need help in finding their next job or a new career path.  They seek counsel to understand their options in the 21st Century, the New Normal.  For these people, the next situation will be entrepreneurial; with emerging companies and established mid-caps.  Likely, their next employer will be a portfolio company owned by a Private Equity Group.  Some have a better grasp on the situation than others, but most have difficulty understanding the digital economy and working with Millennials.  They want to be relevant and contribute. They have the skills to be successful in this environment but do not know it.  The irony is their greatest strength is lacking most in the culture, interpersonal skills.  They need professional help to navigate this environment.

A Career Coach can quickly assess and validate their clients.   The process of validating a candidate is designed to determine if their experiences and skills are supportive of an employer’s company life cycle position, their product line or services, and their company culture. It is a skill I learned in Industry, then honed over 22 years conducting searches.  Leadership is the fundamental skill set employers seek in a Senior Executive.  It is the starting point of the evaluation process.

Begin with the Fundamentals

    • Straightforward concise communications
    • Strategic problem-solving skills, ability to prioritize at a high-level.
    • Leadership skills: vision, alignment, motivation, and accountability
    • Appreciation for culture, values, norms, tradition
    • Situation awareness: matching strategy with life cycle position
    • Integrity: models ethical behavior – their strength of character

My good friend and ITB Partners co-founder, Stan Stout uses a five-point model he calls The Five Cs.

Stan’s 5-C Model

    • Competency
    • Character
    • Culture
    • Changeability (adaptability)
    • Cultivator
    • Communications.

Using these criteria, candidates are probed for the experience that demonstrates competency as a leader in their field.

Understand Your Relevant Skills

Secondly, career coaches identify the candidate’s unique selling proposition, (USP).  The USP are the skills and attributes that make one ‘stand out’ among the competition.  They identify the theme of the person’s career story and determine how to present it most effectively. It provides focus and direction for one’s search.  It is the candidate’s job search strategy.

Effective Communication is Required

Finally, career professionals help their clients communicate their relevance through the various media in play, resume, biography, intro letters, LinkedIn profile, etc. Their clients have good overall communication skills but find it difficult to present themselves. I was surprised to learn that this is common even among the best sales and marketing professionals.  They can sell another’s product but not themselves.  A career professional will help them craft and communicate an effective message.

The result of this approach is the clients find the best situation in the least amount of time.

It is said that a man who represents himself as his own attorney in a court of law has a fool for a client.  I must agree!  There are times when we need the expertise of others.  We cannot possess all the skills necessary to handle every situation.  A different perspective can be valuable.  Hiring a professional career coach can be a good investment, especially in this uncertain environment.

 

Thank you for visiting our blog.

 

Jim Weber – Managing Partner,  ITB Partners

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Jim Weber Completes COO Search for Casual Dining Franchiser

Jim Weber – Managing Partner, ITB Partners

Prior to forming New Century Dynamics Executive Search in 1999, Jim Weber spent 22 years with Fortune 500 companies in the Food Retailing Industry where he developed a broad-based portfolio of “hands-on” line and staff experience in growth and turnaround situations. A proven executive with exceptional leadership skills, Jim has a strong financial background and heavy operations experience in specialty retail stores, quick-service restaurants, manufacturing, and distribution.

For more information about Jim Weber and New Century Dynamics Executive Search, call us at 770-649-7051 or email  JimWeber@NewCenturyDynamics.com

Do You Plan to Achieve Your New Year’s Resolutions?

Goal Setting

It’s that time again! Time to make New Year’s resolutions.  I suppose I’m like most people who revel in the excitement of starting a new year. In many respects, the new year offers the promise of a new beginning or an opportunity for change. It’s fun to share New Year’s resolutions and I’m sure that we’re all serious about achieving our goals.  Regrettably, within a few months, most people have given up on their New Year’s resolutions. Business, on the other hand, is a different story. Companies don’t have New Year’s Resolutions.  They have a vision and objectives.  My experience is that a business is more likely to achieve its goals.  Why is that?

I talked with many people over the past few weeks and have learned much about their plans for 2020.  My friend Faith plans to start a supper club to explore new food dishes and to get back to the art of dining at home.  One of my Associates at ITB Partners has created a strategy to develop multiple blogs, monetized through advertising and affiliate programs. He realizes that becoming profitable may take as much as two years, but he is excited about his prospects.

I am working with clients who want to change careers in 2020. Some are between situations and have the flexibility to explore new options while others are gainfully employed but desire a better situation.

These conversations were most interesting. Of course, the most typical resolutions are about personal development; simplifying lives, losing weight, improving diets, and to follow a healthier lifestyle. Continuing education and developing new skills are also popular.  I also enjoyed hearing from those who didn’t have plans to change anything other than to do better executing their current strategies.

My favorite morning talk show host is changing his strategy to include more knowledgeable pundits who can talk from a strategic perspective. I have a few initiatives that I want to pursue, including a seminar program to attract more clients.

While preparing my thoughts for this post, I found an article that listed 20 goals for entrepreneurs in 2020.  Whereas the goals proposed are relevant for most, the focus of the article was on goal setting.  The article even recapped the SMART formula.  It didn’t devote any ink on how to achieve those goals.  Maybe that is part of the problem.

Exploring this issue over the Holidays, I reviewed my favorite YouTube and podcast channels. One point that resonated profoundly was made by James Clear, the author of Atomic Habits. He talks about making small, manageable changes that generate other changes, which cumulatively make a big impact. I like that idea. I like the thought of finding a linchpin to provide leverage for other goals.

Another point Clear makes is that one needs a system to achieve their goals. This opinion is shared by Scott Adams, the creator of the Dilbert cartoon.  Adams is much more direct as he says “goals are useless, without a system.”  I concur with this point; a system is required to achieve a goal. Another word for a system is routine.

I find this to be a valid perspective! It reminds me of my early career in strategic planning and analysis. The planning process we followed included strategies and tactics (a system) to ensure the desired result. We also established timetables and mechanisms to track our progress. It was a useful process that required serious thought about how to realize our goals. We had a system. Our focus was on executing the strategy.

This year, my primary resolution is to lose the ten pounds I gained between Halloween and New Year’s Day.  I am confident I will be successful, as I have a plan and a system to achieve that goal.  I have several important business goals for 2020 as well. I haven’t completed the plan to achieve those goals yet. However, as I consider planning one of my greatest strengths, I am confident that I will achieve those goals as well.

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Jim Weber – Managing Partner, ITB Partners

 

Jim Weber – Managing Partner, ITB Partners